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She built her home in tear drops
And gave her heart to the sky.
She tied up leaves
Around her sleeves
And pretended she could fly.

One morning in mid Winter
On a day that felt more like Spring,
She opened her ears
To the sound of tears
And imagined she could sing.

Overhead the birds would sweep
In sunshine or in rain.
Part of a crowd
They were happy and proud
And ignorant of her pain.

With a final farewell to teardrops
She climbed the tallest tower...
In her silent voice
She made her choice
Knowing freedom was in her power.

With her gaze up to the heavens
She felt then only peace,
As she took one step more
That trailed across the floor
She finally sought release.

The world lit up in sun beams
As she soared high on makeshift wings,
And the birds gathered round
Because they had found
They could hear music when she sings.
©2004-2009 =acidlullaby
:iconacidlullaby:

Author's Comments

I guess this is a sister poem to my previous one called "The Life and Death of the Puppet Girl". I think this one is a lot less dark when interpreted the right way; a lot more hopeful than the Puppet Girl. *shrug*

Comments


:iconkattiechan:
very pretty poem,me likes a lot^^

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Look on the bright side of life.
:icondark-and-twitchy:
wonderful.
so pretty and dreamy

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:peace:,:heart: and :weed: is all that you need.
:iconwakusei:
wonderful imagery...I like this very much, a nice sister poem

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:tribute: gallery :tribute: clubs :tribute: friends :tribute:
:iconlastlabyrinth:
I really like the rhythm of both of these poems, but I think I like this one better. The last stanza is beautiful :)
I'm horrible at rhyming poetry, so it's very nice to see it done well for a change. xD
:iconakoeabsolute:
This poem is definately less dark than the last one, but equally as good! I like it very much. Though, admittedly, at first I thought she was commiting suicide. I'm sure I'm positively wrong about that, however. More poems, MORE! Please, I mean. ^^
:iconkame:
Good flow it's an awesome poem!
:iconyumeminouta:
Very nice rhythm. ^ ^

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We all have our own tragedies.
:iconpokoa:
nicely written!
i love the way the 3rd and 4rt lines are shorter than the others in each paragraph...if you understand what i mean, it gives a nice "beat" and flow to the poem.

I can really imagine this story with images, because its so beautiful. maybe ill paint for you the pictures it inspires me, like Acidlullaby fanart.

Love you! :blowkiss:
:iconmedievalsorrow:
Beautiful :)

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You laugh at me because i'm different,
I laugh at you because you're all the same.
:iconbj7:
strange....I feel a sense of peace when I read this,...am I weird? o.0
Morbidly beautiful =)

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